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Commission - Kick And Duck by =e1n:icone1n:


©2009 =e1n
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Artist's Comments

2-characters, full color, no background commission for :icondarkness-fails-me:

permission given to upload commission on DA.

it's really too bad she didn't ask for a background. it would've made this look a lot better.

Critiques


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AMAZING movement in this piece. None of the proportions look too off. Even Sanji's leg shooting out at Zoro looks very convincing. Excellent perspective on Zoro. I love how his right foot is visibly closer to the viewer, and the way he's posed gives us a sense of total action, as if he has just ducked. It's also GREAT how the swords are coming out at the viewer. Great design on Sanji's clothes, and the wispy smoke looks great--really stylized. One thing, though, that caught my eye was that I believe Zoro's left arm is a bit skinny---after all, the guy is really muscular. I acknowledge, though, that the artist was working in "Oda Style," where Zoro's proportions are generally skinnier. This is another reason this piece is so awesome. The artist was able to work in Oda's actual style, and really pull it off. It's a great work.
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:iconzorah613:
wow when i first read the title i thought it said kick a duck :/ prooves how bad my vision is without glasses
:D love it

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love it! thats all i can say
:iconlittle-lovely:
It would have looked better, but it's more interesting to focus on the characters and how well they came out rather than the whole shebang.

She must have been excited when she saw this!

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kick a duck works too. marimo duck.

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oh, i didn't mean like a whole blown up background, but some blur of colors to emphasize motion and the smokes. she likes it like this though, so that's all that matters =)

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Two of the coolest guys in One Piece. :)

I dunno--I kinda like the no background. Focuses more on them and the poses are fantastic!

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wow great pose! XD
yeah i agree it'd look even better with a BG on it
but if she liked it the way it is then that's good enough. it's a really great feeling to know that people become happy throught drawings by artists! XD

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This is to kick ass for words.
:iconzorah613:
quack quack ;D

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quack quaaaack quack... = i think i've seen this tree before...

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